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Post by Gabrhil on Feb 9, 2008 23:16:40 GMT -5
Uh, I'm a little slow, who does Veno have in mind? 24 Hours
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-=Dark Ness=-
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Post by -=Dark Ness=- on Feb 9, 2008 23:39:36 GMT -5
You'll see when I put together my next comic.
Oh, believe me. It's much less than 24 hours. >>
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Post by Gabrhil on Feb 10, 2008 0:00:32 GMT -5
Well, estimates arn't always correct.
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Post by Brogen on Feb 10, 2008 2:43:49 GMT -5
Well as long as new comics are coming... The start of my first serial, which probably doesn't have any connection, yet anyway, to Veno's on the short term scale. No one could have survived...
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Post by Bepura on Feb 10, 2008 7:14:21 GMT -5
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Post by Gabrhil on Feb 10, 2008 16:11:13 GMT -5
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Post by Bepura on Feb 10, 2008 16:17:24 GMT -5
A serial is a grouping of episodes into a whole with a cohesive plot. In that vien, slow down guys . Veno hasn't finished his serial yet! Very good comics though, as always . ~Bepura.
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-=Dark Ness=-
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Post by -=Dark Ness=- on Feb 10, 2008 20:39:06 GMT -5
It's alright, actually. >> Gabrhil wouldn't be able to make it in time anyway. I'd say I'm about half-way now with this new comic. "...about 25 minutes."BUMP: Edited first post. >>
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Post by Bepura on Feb 11, 2008 22:57:46 GMT -5
Definitely looking forward to part 4! I've still got to do a few more preparations for mine...
~Bepura.
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Post by Gabrhil on Feb 11, 2008 23:10:39 GMT -5
I've got mine up to. I'm not quite sure about one of the panels though, so if there's a problem, just tell me and I'll cut it out. But it'll have to wait 'till tommorow, I'm going to bed. Saving Private Grif pt.1
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Post by »Propaganda Minister« on Feb 12, 2008 5:05:07 GMT -5
Gabrhil, your issues make my eyes bleed. Good to see at least someone (ie. Ness) knows how to make good comics. The rest of you need shading, colours that are less bright, and speechbubbles with more effort in them. Also. Uh, inverted sprites. *cries*
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Post by Gabrhil on Feb 12, 2008 6:24:18 GMT -5
Uh....thanx.
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Post by swert on Feb 12, 2008 12:51:27 GMT -5
I believe that panel will be an issue, considering this a kid's website, as mature as we all seem to be.
I'd like you to edit it. -RR
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Post by Bepura on Feb 12, 2008 17:53:22 GMT -5
I've been using shading extensively in the last season, which for the most part is not scattered throughout the topic. I like our current speech bubble system too, as anything more complicated wouldn't work with the smaller panels. The colouring system with them also helps to show which character is talking. As for the brighter colours, this is primarily a comedy, despite all our serious stories. The brighter colours keep readers attentive too . You also can't judge us entirely on our earlier material. We're all at different levels of comic making here. Some have been at if for longer than others. Some have more computer programs at their disposal. Gabrhil has done a brilliant job with only MSPaint, and he's really been pulling his weight as a new member of the team. Also consider that we have deadlines whn making these comics, and we've got other things on in our lives to, so we can't spend hours perfecting the speech bubble . Needless to say, I'll take your advice into account. ~Bepura.
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Post by Gabrhil on Feb 12, 2008 17:59:18 GMT -5
I believe that panel will be an issue, considering this a kid's website, as mature as we all seem to be.
I'd like you to edit it. -RR CHeck and done.
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-=Dark Ness=-
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Post by -=Dark Ness=- on Feb 12, 2008 18:01:27 GMT -5
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Post by »Propaganda Minister« on Feb 13, 2008 4:09:59 GMT -5
I've been using shading extensively in the last season, which for the most part is not scattered throughout the topic. I like our current speech bubble system too, as anything more complicated wouldn't work with the smaller panels. The colouring system with them also helps to show which character is talking. As for the brighter colours, this is primarily a comedy, despite all our serious stories. The brighter colours keep readers attentive too . You also can't judge us entirely on our earlier material. We're all at different levels of comic making here. Some have been at if for longer than others. Some have more computer programs at their disposal. Gabrhil has done a brilliant job with only MSPaint, and he's really been pulling his weight as a new member of the team. Also consider that we have deadlines whn making these comics, and we've got other things on in our lives to, so we can't spend hours perfecting the speech bubble . Needless to say, I'll take your advice into account. ~Bepura. I understand these, but it is entirely possible to make good comics [not meaning to insult Gabrhil or anyone here] with Paint - I've done it on a deadline too Not to be cruel or anything. I won't pester you about it anymore.
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Post by LORD INTERNET DOT COM on Feb 13, 2008 11:19:39 GMT -5
I think they're all fine apart from Brogen's hand drawn stuff which is, er, terrible. I mean... there's no other way to put it. Sorry, but it's truly dire.
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Post by Toa of Cheese on Feb 13, 2008 14:36:16 GMT -5
NO one escapes from Davy Jones' locker...or Aegis' "critique." Yikes, could you start making the text a little bigger?
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Post by Brogen on Feb 13, 2008 18:58:09 GMT -5
Well then, new comic for my serial, set after Veno's for everyone's information. 'I am of the Gate."This may seem a little confusing, but all will be explained eventually.
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Post by Gabrhil on Feb 13, 2008 19:45:30 GMT -5
....Is this a Full Metal Alchemist reference? It's just "The Gate" triggers in my mind, FMA. I might be wrong, but, it justs pops in my head.
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Post by -=Dark Ness=- on Feb 13, 2008 20:00:02 GMT -5
I think "The Gate" might reference to the portal Dorp came through, but I'm not exactly certain.
You know what is certain? Part 5 of my serial shall be record breaking and very epic. Stay tuned.
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Post by Bepura on Feb 13, 2008 20:40:35 GMT -5
I'm liking everyone's work from the past few days! Veno's is going brilliantly of course. Gabrhil's side-along sotry to Veno's is also quite good . I'm liking the mysterious fell of Brogen's so far! I'll be starting my serial soon. It will be set after Brogen's. ~Bepura.
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Post by Gabrhil on Feb 14, 2008 21:37:05 GMT -5
Why is it when I make somthing else but this, it's always ignored, god. Saving Private Grif pt.2I'll continue after the next part of Veno's story.
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Post by -=Dark Ness=- on Feb 15, 2008 18:29:57 GMT -5
Hmm. I'm not sure why, other than the Community Comics are so popular that anyone who makes a comic that's part of them is liable to get publicity. Status on my next comic: About 53% 68% 90% 96% done.BUMP: DONE finally! Race Against Time(^Linked due to the massive size of the comic) Final part coming soon, BTW.
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Post by Brogen on Feb 17, 2008 20:20:11 GMT -5
Veno, that has got to be your best comic ever, though some of the text was annoying to read with the platform thing. @gabhril: While I thought the same thing after I read it there was no intentional reference, as I plan to never make any direct references to anything non-mod related in my comic so pretty much anyone on mod can understand them. Veno, you stole my pixel count record... Well I guess I'll have to fix that... "ANOROK!" Enjoy.
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Post by Gabrhil on Feb 17, 2008 21:58:46 GMT -5
Nice, both of them. Question to Veno, what exactly happened to Venus? Is she injured, dieing, somthing? And is Linduki now dead or now in the other world?
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Post by -=Dark Ness=- on Feb 17, 2008 22:12:08 GMT -5
As you might be able to tell from the excess blood... she's severely injured. Possibly dying. As for Linduki, he's not dead or in the other world. >> You see the floating platform everyone was fighting on, along with the random asteroids flying past it every now and then? That's what's supposedly left of the apartment complex. Of the current world. Also, updated sprites for the Megaman X edit characters. >> Veno GaliusVenus Decorincendia
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Post by Gabrhil on Feb 17, 2008 22:17:08 GMT -5
Well, can I use her in my next comic? If so, I'll need a spritesheet.
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Post by -=Dark Ness=- on Feb 17, 2008 22:22:49 GMT -5
Refer to post above, in that case. >>
As long as you don't send her back to the Econtra world ('cause she'll just leave while you're not looking), then yes.
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