Armha Nui
Jan 3, 2008 18:37:29 GMT -5
Post by slymaster15 on Jan 3, 2008 18:37:29 GMT -5
Hi guys! I haven't been here in a while, so most of you don't even remember me, but I've been here since
June 2006. Well, the reason I'm here is because the 2008 story got me back in BIONICLE, and it inspired me to write this story about a land of snow known as Armha Nui.
Ideas for villains or heroes are welcome, and feel free to comment on any thing you might see.
Here are the Toa so far:
Toa Panak: Toa of Fire
Mask: Kanohi Rahli, mask of Unity
Power: Unites even the worst of enemies
Weapons: Two Heat scythes
Personality: Hot-tempered, Impatient, Intelligent
Toa Leron: Toa of Air
Mask: Kanohi Betak, mask of climate/storms
Power: Summons deadly storms that damage only the targets
Weapons: Giant Air Sword
Personality: Suspicious, paranoid, Calm,
Wise
Toa Miel: Toa of Earth
Mask: Kanohi Atla, Mask of Awareness
Power: After battling an enemy for just a few minutes, all their weaknesses are discovered
Weapons: Axe of Configuration
Weapon Power: After scanning an opponent, the Axe transforms into the best possible weapon to exploit the weakness of the enemy.
And here are the bad guys:
Driscythe: Humanoid Dragon
Weapons: Giant acidic protosteel claws
Species: One of Ehlek's kind that was mutated and experimented on by the OoMn.
Weakness: Any gravity based attack
Goal: To retrieve both masks of Power
Reason for being at Armha Nui: Sensed the mask of Time's Energy field under Lake Mades beyond the forest
near Mount Armha.
Power: Has a special sixth sense that lets him identify someone by their distinct radiation of energy.
Status: Alive
Forclaw: The Shadow bird of Xia
Weapons: Rhotuka stolen from Roodaka, and Staff of
Hypnosis
Species: Unknown Species, he claims to have wiped it all out single-handedly, leaving only himself.
Weakness: Any Mentally based attack
Goal: To retrieve mask of Time
Reason for being at Armha Nui: Got a call from an ally on his Retrieval Squad, Driscythe, so he called the rest of the group and they split up, and he and Driscythe take Mount Armha, And the other 4 stayed in the forest.
Status: Alive
Gazen: Spider Demon
Weapons: Visorak hordes and mental disruption
Species: Protodermis mutated Visorak
Weakness: Close Combat
Goal: Retrieve Mask of Time
Reason for being at Armha Nui: The Boss sent him there telling him that the Mask of Time was there.
Status: Alive
So, Here's the first Chapter
Chapter 1: The Power
The Matoran Leron was stressed out. His Village Elder had told him to get more frozen protodermis shells from the shore, and he was stranded in a snowstorm that blew in seemingly out of nowhere. He had found refuge in a cave, but now that it was over he was lost. While wandering in the snow, He spotted a faint silver light under the ice. He dug a few feet and found a frozen mask gleaming with power. He put it in his Pack and started to search throughout the barren desert of snow for a way back to his hut back in the village to observe it.He had found a creek that follows to his village. By the time he had arrived, the mask had already melted out of its frozen chamber. The mask started to move by itself, and crawled toward his face. It was so strong that Leron Couldn't fight back. The mask let its power flow through his body, and he grew up to Toa size. He didn't know what to do, so he went to the turaga to ask about his newly gained power.
Meanwhile, up on Mount Armha,
Driscythe: Hey Forclaw, what are we do'in up here anyway?
Forclaw(sarcastically): We're waiting for a toa to come in and destroy us.
Driscythe: Really?
Forclaw: No, You Idiot! There's a package arriving here any minute, and we're the only ones that can fly.
Driscythe: What's in the package?
Forclaw: The parts needed to build an armored snow sled. If we don't get this, it'll be impossible to get to the lake, which holds the mask.
Dryscythe: Hey look, someone left something in that cave.
Forclaw(walks up to cave): That's the package.
Dryscythe picks up package and hauls it on his back.
Forclaw(on radio): Hey boss, we got the package. We're heading down now.
Other voice: Good.
Chapter 2: Hero
While walking down the mountain, the assassins find a figure frozen in the snow.
Driscythe: Hey, what do you think it could be?
Forclaw: I don't know, but let's take it with us. It could make a perfect minion with some modification.
Driscythe: Alright
Forclaw: Hey wait a second, it's melting.
Driscythe: Oh, Crud.
Toa Panak comes out of fake ice box and takes bag of parts
Panak: Gotcha!
Driscythe: TOA!!!
Attacks with claws.
Panak(dancing around): Keep trying.
Well, I'm done here. See you morons later!
Forclaw: Boss, there's a problem. A toa took the parts!
Boss: No problem, I already saw him going for the lake and sent my two best operatives to follow him.
Forclaw: Alright.
Driscythe: You're goin down, toa.
Chapter 3: Rescue
Panak(running): I gotta lose em.
Gazen: Don't you wanna play, Toa?
Panak: Who--Who are you?
Gazen: That's not important, hand over the package!
Webs fling around him and tie him up
Gazen: Now, let's not make this harder than it's already been.
You hand ocer the package and I'll think about not having my Visorak webs Strangle you. Whaddya say?
: Let him go.
Gazen: Who's there?!
: None of your business.
Mystery figure destroys the webs with a single swing of his sword.
He then grabs the package and sees a Visorak knock Panak out. He goes back and grabs him. He then flies off.
Gazen: Toa!!!!!!!
Gazen: Boss, there's another problem. He got away!
Boss: What?! Is everyone in the squad a stupid dirtbag?
Comments and Critique, Please!
P.S. Ideas Welcome.
June 2006. Well, the reason I'm here is because the 2008 story got me back in BIONICLE, and it inspired me to write this story about a land of snow known as Armha Nui.
Ideas for villains or heroes are welcome, and feel free to comment on any thing you might see.
Here are the Toa so far:
Toa Panak: Toa of Fire
Mask: Kanohi Rahli, mask of Unity
Power: Unites even the worst of enemies
Weapons: Two Heat scythes
Personality: Hot-tempered, Impatient, Intelligent
Toa Leron: Toa of Air
Mask: Kanohi Betak, mask of climate/storms
Power: Summons deadly storms that damage only the targets
Weapons: Giant Air Sword
Personality: Suspicious, paranoid, Calm,
Wise
Toa Miel: Toa of Earth
Mask: Kanohi Atla, Mask of Awareness
Power: After battling an enemy for just a few minutes, all their weaknesses are discovered
Weapons: Axe of Configuration
Weapon Power: After scanning an opponent, the Axe transforms into the best possible weapon to exploit the weakness of the enemy.
And here are the bad guys:
Driscythe: Humanoid Dragon
Weapons: Giant acidic protosteel claws
Species: One of Ehlek's kind that was mutated and experimented on by the OoMn.
Weakness: Any gravity based attack
Goal: To retrieve both masks of Power
Reason for being at Armha Nui: Sensed the mask of Time's Energy field under Lake Mades beyond the forest
near Mount Armha.
Power: Has a special sixth sense that lets him identify someone by their distinct radiation of energy.
Status: Alive
Forclaw: The Shadow bird of Xia
Weapons: Rhotuka stolen from Roodaka, and Staff of
Hypnosis
Species: Unknown Species, he claims to have wiped it all out single-handedly, leaving only himself.
Weakness: Any Mentally based attack
Goal: To retrieve mask of Time
Reason for being at Armha Nui: Got a call from an ally on his Retrieval Squad, Driscythe, so he called the rest of the group and they split up, and he and Driscythe take Mount Armha, And the other 4 stayed in the forest.
Status: Alive
Gazen: Spider Demon
Weapons: Visorak hordes and mental disruption
Species: Protodermis mutated Visorak
Weakness: Close Combat
Goal: Retrieve Mask of Time
Reason for being at Armha Nui: The Boss sent him there telling him that the Mask of Time was there.
Status: Alive
So, Here's the first Chapter
Chapter 1: The Power
The Matoran Leron was stressed out. His Village Elder had told him to get more frozen protodermis shells from the shore, and he was stranded in a snowstorm that blew in seemingly out of nowhere. He had found refuge in a cave, but now that it was over he was lost. While wandering in the snow, He spotted a faint silver light under the ice. He dug a few feet and found a frozen mask gleaming with power. He put it in his Pack and started to search throughout the barren desert of snow for a way back to his hut back in the village to observe it.He had found a creek that follows to his village. By the time he had arrived, the mask had already melted out of its frozen chamber. The mask started to move by itself, and crawled toward his face. It was so strong that Leron Couldn't fight back. The mask let its power flow through his body, and he grew up to Toa size. He didn't know what to do, so he went to the turaga to ask about his newly gained power.
Meanwhile, up on Mount Armha,
Driscythe: Hey Forclaw, what are we do'in up here anyway?
Forclaw(sarcastically): We're waiting for a toa to come in and destroy us.
Driscythe: Really?
Forclaw: No, You Idiot! There's a package arriving here any minute, and we're the only ones that can fly.
Driscythe: What's in the package?
Forclaw: The parts needed to build an armored snow sled. If we don't get this, it'll be impossible to get to the lake, which holds the mask.
Dryscythe: Hey look, someone left something in that cave.
Forclaw(walks up to cave): That's the package.
Dryscythe picks up package and hauls it on his back.
Forclaw(on radio): Hey boss, we got the package. We're heading down now.
Other voice: Good.
Chapter 2: Hero
While walking down the mountain, the assassins find a figure frozen in the snow.
Driscythe: Hey, what do you think it could be?
Forclaw: I don't know, but let's take it with us. It could make a perfect minion with some modification.
Driscythe: Alright
Forclaw: Hey wait a second, it's melting.
Driscythe: Oh, Crud.
Toa Panak comes out of fake ice box and takes bag of parts
Panak: Gotcha!
Driscythe: TOA!!!
Attacks with claws.
Panak(dancing around): Keep trying.
Well, I'm done here. See you morons later!
Forclaw: Boss, there's a problem. A toa took the parts!
Boss: No problem, I already saw him going for the lake and sent my two best operatives to follow him.
Forclaw: Alright.
Driscythe: You're goin down, toa.
Chapter 3: Rescue
Panak(running): I gotta lose em.
Gazen: Don't you wanna play, Toa?
Panak: Who--Who are you?
Gazen: That's not important, hand over the package!
Webs fling around him and tie him up
Gazen: Now, let's not make this harder than it's already been.
You hand ocer the package and I'll think about not having my Visorak webs Strangle you. Whaddya say?
: Let him go.Gazen: Who's there?!
: None of your business.Mystery figure destroys the webs with a single swing of his sword.
He then grabs the package and sees a Visorak knock Panak out. He goes back and grabs him. He then flies off.
Gazen: Toa!!!!!!!
Gazen: Boss, there's another problem. He got away!
Boss: What?! Is everyone in the squad a stupid dirtbag?
Comments and Critique, Please!
P.S. Ideas Welcome.
