Short story
Mar 19, 2008 13:37:27 GMT -5
Post by Ria on Mar 19, 2008 13:37:27 GMT -5
Hi every one. This short story is a preqel to something larger that will appear soon. I don't have a name for it but i hope you'll enjoy it.
Short story
Makuta Torix stared out the windows of the bridge of Her hijacked air ship. She was on a mission for Mutran. her mission was to disrupt the air fleet yard on the island of Sona Nui. Mutran hoped this would delay Rias attack, Torix wasn't so sure. she had fought with Ria and his army during the war against the league of six kingdoms, and they were ruthless.
'' How long till we arrive?'' she asked in her evil, snake like voice to the shadow matoran pilot.
''Not long Mistress, but this fog is interfering with our sensors.'' He replied
''Good.'' she said, but it wasn't.
''Why couldn't Mutran get Sorroix to do this?'' she whisperd to herself. Her Rakshi body gaurd reared its ugly head looking curious. it then went back to staring in to space.
Toa Vano looked down at the monitor and saw the red dot the Matoran had been talking about, he patted him on the back and went back to stand beside the other Toa on the bridge.
'' Good work on the fog sis.'' he said to the Toa as he held out his fist for her to punch, which she did but he got no reply. Poor Amana he thought. the reason she didn't talk was because when she became a toa, she, like the rest of her team was bitten by a Visorak. her transformation cancelled out most of the effects but her right arm had been mutated into a Rotuka spinner launcher, she hadn't talked since.
''Start charging the cannon and bring us in range '' he orderd his crew. he smiled as he heard the familiar sound of the Kahrazanhi's Particle cannon charging.
Torix supressed a squeal of fear as she saw what came out of the fog, the Karazanhi, already with energy welling up in side. She walked over to the four armed pilot she had taken a shine to and whisperd to him.
'' Do you want to live?'' she asked him. The pilot nodded and followed her of the bridge. The other matoran then started panicking as they saw the huge air ship coming towards them. Torix shape shifted and grew a pair of great black wings and a matoran connection point. The shadow matoran connected and Torix nodded to her Rahkshi. It punched a hole in the air ship large enough for Torix to fly out, Which she did followed by the rakshi. The last she saw of her air ship it was exploding in a bright star burst.
THE END
What do you think. Please tell me
Short story
Makuta Torix stared out the windows of the bridge of Her hijacked air ship. She was on a mission for Mutran. her mission was to disrupt the air fleet yard on the island of Sona Nui. Mutran hoped this would delay Rias attack, Torix wasn't so sure. she had fought with Ria and his army during the war against the league of six kingdoms, and they were ruthless.
'' How long till we arrive?'' she asked in her evil, snake like voice to the shadow matoran pilot.
''Not long Mistress, but this fog is interfering with our sensors.'' He replied
''Good.'' she said, but it wasn't.
''Why couldn't Mutran get Sorroix to do this?'' she whisperd to herself. Her Rakshi body gaurd reared its ugly head looking curious. it then went back to staring in to space.
Toa Vano looked down at the monitor and saw the red dot the Matoran had been talking about, he patted him on the back and went back to stand beside the other Toa on the bridge.
'' Good work on the fog sis.'' he said to the Toa as he held out his fist for her to punch, which she did but he got no reply. Poor Amana he thought. the reason she didn't talk was because when she became a toa, she, like the rest of her team was bitten by a Visorak. her transformation cancelled out most of the effects but her right arm had been mutated into a Rotuka spinner launcher, she hadn't talked since.
''Start charging the cannon and bring us in range '' he orderd his crew. he smiled as he heard the familiar sound of the Kahrazanhi's Particle cannon charging.
Torix supressed a squeal of fear as she saw what came out of the fog, the Karazanhi, already with energy welling up in side. She walked over to the four armed pilot she had taken a shine to and whisperd to him.
'' Do you want to live?'' she asked him. The pilot nodded and followed her of the bridge. The other matoran then started panicking as they saw the huge air ship coming towards them. Torix shape shifted and grew a pair of great black wings and a matoran connection point. The shadow matoran connected and Torix nodded to her Rahkshi. It punched a hole in the air ship large enough for Torix to fly out, Which she did followed by the rakshi. The last she saw of her air ship it was exploding in a bright star burst.
THE END
What do you think. Please tell me