The war of the elements

[zarayna]

prologue

You see me as I am now, a figure tall but shrouded by shadow.
I once was a being of light and not shadow, but the world has changed
since Mata Nui died.
The universe has been cast into shadow, now only the elements of metal, air and shadow remain for they are not
living. I am light, twisted
into shadow; once I was Larundu Fanga, which means in the language of the
elements Power of Light. The world is cloaked in shadow
but I will tarry in telling the shameful and sad tale of
the war of the elements



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[zarayna]

Chapter 1
The death of the Brotherhood of Makuta


I felt myself slowly rising into the air even as I reached with the power of light bending all light into me. My mind wandered back to the time that this accursed war began.


The Brotherhood of Makuta had waged war on Metru Nui enslaving the Matoran and slaying the Toa and Turaga and generally terrizing and conquering one of the most important cities in the world.

Finally, word reached us, Larundu Feldare the spirit of Fire had purposed that we charged in with armies of Toa and wipe the Brotherhood of Makuta off the face of the earth.

Larundu Dartha agreed with him while Larundu Seleth and I argued Saying that it would do more harm than good to destroy the Makuta, for without them the Barraki would have destroyed metru nui.

Feldare yelled that the Makuta were doing the same thing that the Barraki had done and that their fate must be the same.


Larundu Seldarna and Itdarna agreed, and won but only we were to go us seven, for we were the living elements among the most powerful beings in the Bionicle universe. I was light, Feldare was fire, Seldarna was nature(plantlife and rahi control) Itdarna was ice Seleth was water Dartha was earth Rondar was stone. And the differences in us were huge Feldare was had a hot and burning temper, Seleth was like the general (or is it generaless) of her army the toa Gali…

I unleashed the most powerful Nova blast of light I had ever made, Makuta were blasted with heat and light; they writhed in agony as the power of light thundered through them, for being creatures of shadow light hurt them more then anything.


And then it ceased, I gasped with shock falling to my knees, my form of light was nearly destroyed! I quickly shifted to my regular form and looked about. For miles around stretched a huge crater, parts of Rakshi and pieces of Makuta armor littered it. The elements staggered to their feet—they had used their powers to protected themselves—and there was fist-clanking and congratulations all around, for the Brotherhood of Makuta was defeated. High above them a cloud of greenish energy was floating unconscious and half dead, it was Teridax the last Makuta he would return….



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