crudelious
Matoran
I'm pretty and you know it!
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Post by crudelious on Jun 24, 2008 14:41:56 GMT -5
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Post by bonecrusher on Jun 24, 2008 15:20:27 GMT -5
They're, they're, they're...amazing!Nothing wrong with either of them.KUTGW!
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crudelious
Matoran
I'm pretty and you know it!
Posts: 46
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Post by crudelious on Jun 25, 2008 14:29:19 GMT -5
Thanx!  |
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DEATH PANDA
Toa Nuva
IM GOIN RIP OUT YOUR INTESTINES AND EAT THEM
Posts: 1,277
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Post by DEATH PANDA on Jun 26, 2008 3:41:09 GMT -5
LOL WUT
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Post by bonecrusher on Jun 26, 2008 12:24:56 GMT -5
*eats Toa of Whimsy*...*notices people staring*What?He's a loaf of bread.Apparently, I love bread. |
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DEATH PANDA
Toa Nuva
IM GOIN RIP OUT YOUR INTESTINES AND EAT THEM
Posts: 1,277
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Post by DEATH PANDA on Jun 26, 2008 15:16:58 GMT -5
*eats Toa of Whimsy*...*notices people staring*What?He's a loaf of bread.Apparently, I love bread. ENGRISH BREAD IS INDESTRUCTIBLE IT GET YOU THE HOT PAIN OF CONSTIPATE TO DIE!! and... what is up with this topic? |
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Masterweaver
Toa
And with a flit of his wings, the so-called trader dissappeared...
Posts: 84
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Post by Masterweaver on Jun 26, 2008 20:08:52 GMT -5
I could build those if I had the pieces. But since I don't have the pieces, I'll just stand over here in a jealous stupor.
Seriously, though, those are grandiose. Now give them a plot and you're set!
And where do you people get those fingers from?
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Post by Primus on Jul 12, 2008 15:04:44 GMT -5
And where do you people get those fingers from?
Anyways, the matoran is nice. I like the matoran, the design is good. The color layering is a bit off on it, mainly on the upper arms. If you can, I suggest replacing the grey egg shaped pieces with black ones. Also, change the feet to black, right now there is too much grey in the lower legs.
The Toa, on the otherhand, is not too good. It looks too jumbled. I don't see why you added all the gears. It also has too many colors. The head seems to be off center. Asymetry is nice in little quatinties, but when the whole MOC is asymetrical, it doesn't always look good. Also, I think you made this overly custom. Maybe replace the lower legs with Metru blue Rahkshi legs, same with the lower arms. And try to unify the color scheme. Have only two blues, and either black or grey. Hope that helps.
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