Ria and beavers review topic

[Ria]

Right I'm making this topic to let people comment on our stories. if you have questions, ideas for our stories or criticism post them here. Hopefully this will keep the stories themselves uncluttered. Also this will cover any thing we churn out.

[Takal]

This goes for my useless junk as well.

[Ria]

Thats what I said.

[Takal]

or is it...

[Ria]

Ok I found it. I never knew you were this good at writing.

[Ria]

Someone please say something about Takal.

[Takal]

I've named Jaller mahrii's crab 'mittens'.

[Ria]

Ok, the story in question is Takal. I would link it but I'm not that good with computers.

[Takal]

I'm writing a pair of new stories for MoD. Each will be named, like Takal, for its main charicter. Each also ties in with the Ria's army theme. One is 'Alternate Dimension Axonn' which goes on about the happenings of the Axonn from the dimension Takanuva went to. Axonn makes his way to the ordinary bionicle world through a portal created by a mask of dimensional gates.
The other is Avak. He was recruited before he went into pit waters, and escaped the fate of the other five. He is Ria's armourer, and makes all of the weapons and vehicles.
the first vote for either (not both) wins.

Somewhere in the near future, we'll have 'RIA,' 'Ria,' 'Maroo' and 'Lariska.' None of those are started yet, so don't vote for them.

Tata!

[Takal]

Did I hear Axonn?? No?
well I'm going to keep that till later. Avak is better, it's got exo-rahkshii and guns and motorbikes and stuff.

[Takal]

then give me your thoughts on Takal or avak.

Takal, which comes first, is here

maskofdestiny.proboards52.com/index.cgi?board=creativeoutlet&action=display&thread=867

And Avak is here

maskofdestiny.proboards52.com/index.cgi?board=creativeoutlet&action=display&thread=963