Story of Toa Voltcal

[Crono]

Prologue:


Long ago in the Peaceful Land of Mecha Nui, A Lone Toa Struggled to Keep Peace while Mecha Nui was in it's darkest hour, then went to help other lands. This Toa's name is Voltcal: Toa of Fire and protector of Mecha Nui. It was all Peaceful before Makuta decided to wage war aganst it, it was the brutal Battle for the center of Mecha Nui, Makuta has Captured Mostly half the Population. When it was Hopeless Voltcal made the most fatal Mistake of Using his Ability Super Nova. Half the City was in the Ocean while the Other Half was In ruins, That Happend Seven Years ago. Now Toa Voltcal and his Army of matoran and Rahi and other Beings Struggled in the Fight, Over 2.000 Strong. Can they Survive and take Mecha Nui back? Or will Makuta, After all these years finnaly control Mecha Nui?

Chapter one Coming Soom!


Please Post your Compliments, critisisim here:

[Tanaku, Toa of Light]

isnt 200,000 a bit... much? Id lower it... ALOT. Maybe just 200 or 2,000?

[Crono]

Chapter 1! (Yes!)



Toa Voltcal sat in his chair and thought of the things to come, them he got to thinking This war is killing Mecha Nui, Seven years of pain... then he snapped "..Mata Nui! Where is this King? This Person to be King and save this land!?!"

One of his Matoran friends came in and said "Voltcal, We have a transmission from makuta's agent."

Voltcal: "That fool is going to try the 'You must Surrender' thing again, what does he hope to accomplish?"

Matoran: "He says that it's about... well you have to find out first."

Voltcal: "Thank you."

When the Matoran left Voltcal had the usual disagreement

Voltcal: "What do you want now Makuta-Spawn?"

Kal: "my name in Kal, Don't forget it."

Voltcal: "Whatever, What do you want?"

Kal: "Makuta demands that you surrender now, your city (whats left of it) and your people will be taken care of. Refuse you will have to face the wrath of the Makuta."

Voltcal: "Go to ****."

Kal: "Then Prepare to be destroyed."

The transmission ended and then went on the usual raids and attack's, this went on for days until general Kal gave up and went back to his fortress in the middle of the island. Voltcal and his Army Pushed him back many times, But now the talk of a King coming to save them became less and less important.


Who is this king? Find out in Chapter 2 of: Story of Voltcal

[Crono]

Chapter 2:


While this was going on, no one ever knew that in another world: Where humans and other organic things lived. Lived Jack a human boy about 16 years old was having a problem

Jack: "Mom!"

Jack's Mom: "What now?"

Jack: "What do you mean 'What now?'! those brats wont quit coming in my room!"

Jack's Mom: "Girls! get out of Jack's room! NOW!"

Jack's Sisters: "Okay!"

Jack went back into his room and laid down to read his book.



*Meanwhile in Mecha Nui*

Toa Voltcal sat with his members leading the resistance force of Mecha nui. So far, It's not going well at all.

Voltcal: "So, your telling me that half our force wants to leave? Tell me why?"

One of the leaders named Siltu said "It's cause of this king you talked about, well you've told them this for seven years and look what's become of it, One matoran told me 'Where is your king? it's been seven years since you gave us that B******* about him or it.' And he also told me that alot of this army wants out, and it looks like they have disbanded.''

Volcal: "And where does that Lead us pray tell."

Siltu: "About 500."

Voltcal's voice sounded like thunder when he said "WHAT!?!"

Siltu told Voltcal to calm down, but Voltcal told him "Have you any idea how many beings Kal has? I'll tell ya! He has over 12.000 Beings in his Command alone! how do we face an army of that size if we only have 500!?! Why we lost 1500 Matoran, Now we have what?" Siltu told him and Voltcal said "That isn't bad, some Cordak Blasters, matoran, rahi and some robotic beings. that should still keep Kal and his army away."


Little did Voltcal or Jack know that their paths will cross, what will happen when they do?