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Post by Kokua aviatrix on Jan 24, 2008 6:06:20 GMT -5
It looks very interesting. My only criticsim is that Muaka are more like tigers than bears. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
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Rekky
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Post by Rekky on Jan 24, 2008 7:47:41 GMT -5
Muaka are more like tigers, but they are really bears. I might not have chapter 2 up soon. Got to finish my school work first.
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*Tahu_Nuva_Ninja*
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Post by *Tahu_Nuva_Ninja* on Feb 1, 2008 13:53:24 GMT -5
Nice story.. Looks good.
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