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Post by kongu479 on Jan 2, 2008 17:01:25 GMT -5
Steppenwolf is a Rahi species. They lived in Ko-Koro. However, the species somehow died out. But, one Stepppenwolf remains. This Steppenwolf is a noble, cold, smart, and helpful creature. It is known for helping Ko-Matoran out at the Knowledge Towers in Ko-Metru. Also, the Steppenwolf has a beak, and two forearms. Strangely, it has a claw on its tail and stands on it, using the legs for arms. It is also an omnivore. Enjoy.
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Post by LORD INTERNET DOT COM on Jan 2, 2008 17:46:39 GMT -5
Born to be wild?!
Err, I dunno how to comment. Sparks of originality are killed by the super-bland body and lack of much of an interesting colourscheme.
And what's going on with that foot?
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Post by kongu479 on Jan 2, 2008 17:49:47 GMT -5
Well, this is my first MOC. It does have a shell on it's back, and it has no foot, just a tail used for walking. But I still thank you for commenting.
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Post by kopakalady on Jan 2, 2008 23:14:51 GMT -5
I actually really like the whole idea, its very creativity and originality in it. =) And since this is your first MoC don't be too hard on yourself, it just takes practice like if you were drawing or learning to play some music.
I really like everything except for the tail. It’s a good idea that he kind of slivers/walks with the tail but it looks a bit like a foot so it may cause confusion.
But still very nice start for MOCing, keep it up. Though you might want to link this picture instead of making it a full image, I'm having some screen stretching issues.
Another note I've been meaning to tell you (though this is off topic), you're banners are too large in your signature and it needs to be to a minimum of one unless you have a bunch of small ones, go check out the Banner Guidelines to help you with that.
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Post by Crono on Jan 3, 2008 15:47:41 GMT -5
Looks Good, But I was Surprised that your Tail Looked like a Foot...
I Can also tell you(Like Kopaka Lady said) Practice. And soon you'll be able to make Bigger and Better MoC's.
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Post by Madaraki on Jan 3, 2008 16:30:50 GMT -5
The tail/foot thing is a good idea, although it seems a bit...stiff the way half the tail hits the foot vertically and the rest of it comes out from behind.
I'd suggest making a far longer tail with a spike on the end (anchoring itself to tower sides?) and then have a really short leg out the lower part of it a la slivers?[/color]
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