Ria
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Post by Ria on Aug 24, 2008 11:22:51 GMT -5
Right I'm making this topic to let people comment on our stories. if you have questions, ideas for our stories or criticism post them here. Hopefully this will keep the stories themselves uncluttered. Also this will cover any thing we churn out.
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Takal
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Post by Takal on Aug 26, 2008 14:43:17 GMT -5
This goes for my useless junk as well.
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Post by Ria on Aug 26, 2008 14:45:13 GMT -5
Thats what I said.
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Post by Takal on Aug 26, 2008 15:02:06 GMT -5
or is it...
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Post by Ria on Aug 27, 2008 14:23:25 GMT -5
Ok I found it. I never knew you were this good at writing.
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Post by Ria on Aug 31, 2008 11:28:09 GMT -5
Someone please say something about Takal.
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Post by Takal on Sept 2, 2008 14:03:03 GMT -5
I've named Jaller mahrii's crab 'mittens'.
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Ria
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Post by Ria on Sept 4, 2008 14:36:07 GMT -5
Ok, the story in question is Takal. I would link it but I'm not that good with computers.
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Post by Takal on Sept 9, 2008 14:50:00 GMT -5
I'm writing a pair of new stories for MoD. Each will be named, like Takal, for its main charicter. Each also ties in with the Ria's army theme. One is 'Alternate Dimension Axonn' which goes on about the happenings of the Axonn from the dimension Takanuva went to. Axonn makes his way to the ordinary bionicle world through a portal created by a mask of dimensional gates. The other is Avak. He was recruited before he went into pit waters, and escaped the fate of the other five. He is Ria's armourer, and makes all of the weapons and vehicles. the first vote for either (not both) wins.
Somewhere in the near future, we'll have 'RIA,' 'Ria,' 'Maroo' and 'Lariska.' None of those are started yet, so don't vote for them.
Tata!
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Post by Takal on Sept 16, 2008 13:54:09 GMT -5
Did I hear Axonn?? No? well I'm going to keep that till later. Avak is better, it's got exo-rahkshii and guns and motorbikes and stuff.
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Post by Takal on Sept 23, 2008 13:50:58 GMT -5
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